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Wednesday 15 May 2019

sebastian long writing

I was at home and I was in bed sleeping I got up and I went down to the TV I put the TV on and the news was on and they said that there is going to be a flood people that are in the city you have to leave you home if you are not going you must have a boat or a car. At your home and you must leave now ok. If you live in a big building you must be in a big building so you can’t get swept away and you can be at the very top of a building. And if you are going in a car you must leave now and must go to your next city and star  there when the flood is over. Then the flood came and I went to the top of my building and I star there and the flood did not go away I got onto a boat and I went away and when I got back from the flood the food was over now but it was not over at all and I star on my boat for ever then the flood was over now and my home was in pics and the home and builds were all in pics. 2 years after the flood and now my home is dun when I get inside I put the TV on and the news was on for the last time the and they said that there is going to be a flood come on why is there going to be the last flood. my home is going to be in pics but it was in the city far away from here it is
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4 comments:

  1. Caleb31 May 2019 at 12:44

    Hello my name is Caleb, and I come from Pt England School. What an interesting story. It sounds like the flood was scary. What inspired you to make this story? What would you do if this happened in real life?

    Regards
    Caleb, Pt England School

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  2. Amelia31 May 2019 at 12:55

    Hi Sebastian,

    My name is Amelia and I am a Year 8 student from PES

    What an interesting blog post you have here! I am not a fan of long writing but reading your blog post makes me change the thought of that! If this happens to you in actually real like how would you feel? Scared? Brave?

    Thanks,
    Amelia

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  3. Anonymous19 June 2019 at 11:59

    Hi Sebastian. You did lots of writing in your volcana writing. Amazing work on your blogs. Maybe add more next time on your sport writing. What blog do you like? From Sahil.

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  4. Anonymous7 August 2019 at 13:23

    thanks sahil you are the best

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